The Motions
Aug. 21st, 2003 07:30 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I keep going through the motions. What would he say?
I found that written in a yellow paper notebook I brought with me on the bus this morning. It has no context around it. It came after the first draft of "She's Having a Baby", which I wrote in June, so I set it down recently. But I don't know what I meant. What motions? Who is he?
It sounds like the opening for a story. About a woman whose husband has died, perhaps. But that's a little too prosaic, isn't it?
And I meant something else when I wrote it, I'm sure.
But I don't know what.
I found that written in a yellow paper notebook I brought with me on the bus this morning. It has no context around it. It came after the first draft of "She's Having a Baby", which I wrote in June, so I set it down recently. But I don't know what I meant. What motions? Who is he?
It sounds like the opening for a story. About a woman whose husband has died, perhaps. But that's a little too prosaic, isn't it?
And I meant something else when I wrote it, I'm sure.
But I don't know what.
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Date: 2003-08-21 11:22 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-08-21 01:30 pm (UTC)