Peace and Joy: Just When

[rowyn]

This has some of the worst drawings in the entire run. The only one I like is the panel with Peace looking back over her shoulder. It also made me acutely aware of how many panels in this project are simply two people talking to each other. 'Course, most comic panels are two people talking to each other, and I prefer that to, say, two people fighting, so I don't know what I'm complaining about.

Oh, and I ran out of room for the words in the top panel, obviously. But the last panel of page 15 is the only one where my first effort to cram the words in was such a flop that I wound up cut-n-pasting (literally! Well, scotch-taping, technically) a new word balloon in over the failed one. But hey, that counts!

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Yet Another Superhero Movie

[barbx.livejournal.com]

***** INCOMING MESSAGE *****

The remaining plot could be as simple as this: Peace and Joy fetch the guard; much insect exoskeleton is kicked; Diana is saved; everyone is happy.

I expect more from you. That is why I am intrigued to see where the plot is going.

I don't particularly care how good or bad the drawings are. The story and characters are the core; the art is merely an embellishment. As long as they convey soul and passion, they are good.

Pondering faeries in neon green.
-- BarbX

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