Peace and Joy: Just When

[rowyn]

This has some of the worst drawings in the entire run. The only one I like is the panel with Peace looking back over her shoulder. It also made me acutely aware of how many panels in this project are simply two people talking to each other. 'Course, most comic panels are two people talking to each other, and I prefer that to, say, two people fighting, so I don't know what I'm complaining about.

Oh, and I ran out of room for the words in the top panel, obviously. But the last panel of page 15 is the only one where my first effort to cram the words in was such a flop that I wound up cut-n-pasting (literally! Well, scotch-taping, technically) a new word balloon in over the failed one. But hey, that counts!

Comments

[jordangreywolf.livejournal.com]

Yeah, and you need to have a dramatic panel with the faerie in a pose (one leg bag, one bent, one arm pulled back, and the other one thrust forward in exaggerated perspective - with a clobbered aphid being blasted, askew, toward the viewer, stage-right).

Hm. Tempted to draw. Too bad I'm at work.