I think the weakest part in your anecdote is that it's not explicitly clear how your friend was keeping you from helping her.
Ah, righto. I think that in my desire to be brief and not crash LJ with a monster-sized comment, I left out some helpful details. *peers at her homework* I believe I see two places in which I can elaborate, so I'll do a little revising tomorrow and re-post.
By the way, if these writing exercises continue apace, should I keep posting my responses here or just stick 'em in my own journal? :-)
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Date: 2003-06-27 06:27 pm (UTC)Ah, righto. I think that in my desire to be brief and not crash LJ with a monster-sized comment, I left out some helpful details. *peers at her homework* I believe I see two places in which I can elaborate, so I'll do a little revising tomorrow and re-post.
By the way, if these writing exercises continue apace, should I keep posting my responses here or just stick 'em in my own journal? :-)