Hmm. I didn't hate the first scene, but the book definitely gets better when the two protagonists are interacting. If the sample goes through chapter 2, I'd suggest reading through chapters 1 & 2, and if you still find the writing awkward at that point, it's worth giving up.
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Date: 2015-03-06 09:43 pm (UTC)