>"a damaged shoggoth... one can teleport between points and even dimensions... she took the shape of whatever people she was hanging around with... simulated senses according to those of the people around her... gender was pretty arbitrary..."
I'm glad you never mentioned this to me way back when proofreading "Portals" for me... I'd have died. ':)
(Yes, I know it's probably par for the course with shapeshifters, but still. I don't know if you'd ever gotten [or perhaps more accurately, if I'd gotten] to the part where you discover the damaged shapeshifter bit. Yours sounds far better and more well-thought out, by far.)
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I might have actually been at FurryMUCK in '94...
Date: 2006-09-26 03:55 am (UTC)I'm glad you never mentioned this to me way back when proofreading "Portals" for me... I'd have died. ':)
(Yes, I know it's probably par for the course with shapeshifters, but still. I don't know if you'd ever gotten [or perhaps more accurately, if I'd gotten] to the part where you discover the damaged shapeshifter bit. Yours sounds far better and more well-thought out, by far.)