3rdragon: (firebird)
3rdragon ([personal profile] 3rdragon) wrote in [personal profile] rowyn 2017-02-25 08:30 pm (UTC)

I had not overtly noticed it before, but you're doing a nice job of having the tone of the narration signal a shift a switch in narrative focus characters, even before it's obvious that we're in Ardent's POV now.

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