Date: 2010-11-29 05:43 am (UTC)
Just a niggle here that caught my eye.

Instead of saying "the whole thing seems to..." claim the idea and turn the passive into active like this: "the whole thing does violate". Now you have a much stronger statement and it's the little psychological things like these that help turn the tide of public opinion.

//end niggle
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